xanthan gum

There is a path that runs through sugar grasses and corn mazes, by streets with roaring disks of light, stars streaking through uncounted trees and unmapped farmland - this road ...

Just some mechanics: Goddess is spelled wrong. The rhythm is off on L7, perhaps cut "glistening". I like the unstructured rhyme. It's refreshing. It's simple, and I appreciate it for ...

Your fountain runs dry, without ivy or mold Frail frame, curled round the cracked cement, you eyes open only to count the wrinkles from time, to scratch them out on ...

Just dropped in to say that I love all the Greek allusions, and I'll get back to this.

...I apologize on the wording, I'll tweak it as much as possible -- you see, it's a quote from Homer's THE ODYSSEY =/

I break these stanzas down like so because the first is the balanced side of the mystical and the second is the balanced side of science and chemistry, which are ...

Hermes's headlights breast the horizon and we stand side-by-side, casting shadows across the River Stix, black and etched asphalt, a thousand graffiti souls steaming on the surface. Clutching my thin ...

Gammahydroxybutyrate is a date rape drug. I hope this translates some of the imagery for you, as it is more centered on the chemical reactions taking place in the body ...

There's nothing wrong with this. In a mechanical sense, that is. But this poem doensn't make me care evne a snipit for any sort of lost souls or lamentation. I ...

Pencils red yellow blue green Some are colorful, abstract. In addition to bubbles, I think that "red, yellow, blue, green" and "colorful" are too ...colorful, if you will, for the ...

all we say comes out as speak-easy whispers, simple as breathing into the spaces between us. now that I know that I’m in love with him, his hands cover my ...

I enjoyed this - and this is a fair piece of work, as long as you are aware that what you have written is nothing more than what it is ...

..I won't be reading that description there. Stuff like that belongs in a blog. If your poem is properly written, I should be able to relate to the situation easily ...

I'm sure there's an artistic reason why you didn't use any punctuation besides the full stops, but really...it's driving me insane. I just want to go through and go COMMA ...

The sunlight keeps intricate time on the iron facade of tinfoil cans, chrome vessels that find themselves crushed together, God's impending fist of fire and ashen rock brandishing fingers that ...